Oh well see when she's unconscious her body responds more favourably to him! Tip to Ms. Thomas: when trying to write sympathetic hero not having him have sex with the heroine when she doesn't want to should be high on your list! (Also don't set your romance in colonial India because then I will have to struggle with the fact that your main characters are the villains. It's hard to root for the hero when you're cheering for the revolutionaries!)
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Date: 2010-12-23 01:15 am (UTC)