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Finally got around to posting one of my poems on fictionpress (because I'm too much of a coward to take it to Writer's Club. I love all the members but I'm afraid Corey would be normal and label it emo or be polite and not say anything. Both would suck). ebony_creme I'm not sure but I think the title was either inspired or borrowed from you. If it's the last I apologize. Nothing else seemed to fit (thanks as well!).

Paint By Number

Please criticise harshly. I may be a coward when it comes to showing my writings to people I see everyday but I really would like advice on how to improve. Go and rip it apart I say!